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Falling Water

Falling Water
trickles down
hewns out rocks
with silent sound

Quietly, clearly
pouring down
endeavors gently toward hardest ground

Pours not just for multitudes
but burned out hearts
needing something new

Soldiers in the midst of these
Fall upon their bended knees
Praying, praying
all to Thee

Falling Water,
Falling Water,
Gently, gently
fall on me

Hearts that live because of this;
Falling Water's gentleness
lovingly guided by His eye;
Vigilent watches through the sky
Faithfully covers us through each lie

Falling Water
Pouring Water
gently, gently,
water me

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Posted by: Vincet683rd Sep, 2009
Victorsedge - great to see you add something - how do you see this fitting in with the narrative of the Story?